Haikus

On The Snack page you'll find a Tick-the-Code haiku. I'd really like to hear your comments on it. You can even send me your suggestions on any topic...

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Bochum in winter
Raindrops keep falling on me
Like summer only colder

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Dusty tracks salty
Springtime wind blows in a rush
Sand grinds in my teeth

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Sit down stand-up starts
The audience yells at me
As the line doesn't punch